Wednesday, January 21, 2009

the eighth

mar k writes a Song for a Girl.

i'm always on your side
i'd try for you
i'd die for you
tonight

i'll love you every day
we'll see this through
we never knew
today

and what i say is true, it took you to make me real
and this is how i swear i'll always feel
i will always be near
i swear to you...i'll stay right here

and when you're on the ground
i'll pick you up
we'll make our own luck
this year

and what i say is true, it took you to make me real
and this is how i swear i'll always feel
i will always be near
i swear to you...i'll stay right here

[Tim solo]

i'm always on your side
i'll try for you
i'll die for you
tonight

it's actually coming together pretty well. i need a bridge and the chorus needs some work, but if i was the average consumer, i'd love to hear a song like this on the radio. modest, i know.

-mar k

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